Hello it's Emily from Grey Main School I really like your slide about the animals. Which one was your favourite? Next time maybe add more descriptive words and more information. But other than that it looks great.
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Hello Sam. Nice slide and the animals are also cool! Which one out of them was the most boring to write about
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ReplyDeletehello! awesome slide about the animals! which animal is your Favourite?
ReplyDeleteHello it's Emily from Grey Main School I really like your slide about the animals. Which one was your favourite? Next time maybe add more descriptive words and more information. But other than that it looks great.
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